“It took me fifteen years to discover that I had no talent for writing, but I couldn't give it up because by that time I was too famous.”
Robert Benchley

author: Nicole J. LeBoeuf

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Notes from the author:

The original writing prompt doesn't matter. No euphoniums, no chatoyant beads strung in repetitive patterns, appear in the final draft. The connections between the initial Tarot spread and the story that ultimately unfolds are unintuitive and tenuous.

Here's me, babbling to myself on the page in an attempt to get Story started: "Gems can be beads; notes can be gems strung on a string; replay is what you do if you want to hear it played again. I'm beginning to get the sense of a parade, a procession, with a star instrument..."

I can no longer remember how one sentence lead to the next. The link has gone missing. Only the musical procession remains.

The first they knew of the procession was a far-off, throbbing note, low and hesitant: a tuba, maybe; maybe a sousaphone. Maybe just a large truck honking its displeasure at the traffic--but no one thought that for an instant. They knew what it was. If their ears didn’t recognize it, their bones knew, and their hearts began to break.

Then came the first note of the trumpet.

Most of the cafe patrons abandoned their cooling drinks and crowded out onto the patio, where they strained and stared toward the farthest point down the street they could pin with their eyes. A few remained indoors, subsiding at their tables into gentle hopelessness. And the barista stood perplexed behind the counter, hands idle and eyes searching. “What--”

“Ssh.” The busser put the black tub of dirty coffee mugs down on the counter as carefully as she could. Then she leaned heavily against the countertop. She hung her head. Her shoulders begin to shake.

The trumpets came into view, row upon row of them moving inexorably up the street. The barista could see them now, and how the faces of the trumpeters, pale as morning and dark as night and every color in between, were bathed in sunlight reflected off each brass bell. Row upon row of them, and then at last the trombones, their slides moving in perfect unison. It took much longer than it takes to read about it, there were so many of them, and they passed so slowly, less a march than a disciplined trudge, each step as heavy as a funeral.

That’s what it was, the barista realized. A funeral. He wondered how he knew. Then a sob from one of the front tables caught his ear--the businessman huddled there weakly against the window glass--and he wondered how it had taken him so long to figure it out. “Who died?” he asked as tactfully as he could. The busser drew a ragged breath but did not use it to answer him.

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