“Some days you battle yourself and other monsters. Some days you just make soup.”
Patricia McKillip

author: Nicole J. LeBoeuf

actually writing blog

Ha. Success.
Wed 2004-11-24 00:56:40 (in context)
  • 38,725 words (if poetry, lines) long
  • 0.00 hrs. revised

I am not proud of what I just wrote.

No, it's not the scene I've been agonizing over. It was a Mitch scene, though, and it wasn't pretty.

It did show some more of Mitch in his element, and the role Diane has to play when she's out with him, so it wasn't totally irredeemable. Introduced a few characters from his gang, at least one of which will be in the car with him On That Fatal Night. My plan is to just keep that up for now and let what I learn from that inform what actually goes into the paragraphs leading up to the shooting.

No blood on the keys tonight, so that's all right too.

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